Ok I prefer this one, this is kinda repetitive too but your keep it interesting adding more stuff, you have to work on that transition in the 1:51, it was abrupt, you should add reverse cymbals with reverb or something like that to make it better. I also loved the soutdoors designacio on that bass! Is very gritty and bassy xdxd, but again, the mixing is not that good, you can ask me any doubt you have about mixing or production in Discord :D