Zelgeon's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[~SW~ The Single River]

That clap is off sometimes lol
Your voice sounds beautiful here, nice work :)

SkyeWint responds:

Hey Zelgeon! Sadly, not my voice. :( I haven't done any good singing in my music yet. I plan to make something with that soon though!

[Make It Easy]

Beautiful voice and lyrics ;D

[Dovax - Deep Jungle VIP]

Another deep bounce banger!! Actually, i think there is nothing wrong with this one, i will just tell you to make sure to cut the high frequencies of your reverb when you use very punchy sounds like the main pluck of the intro, that is to avoid the annoying reverb of the click that the pluck has ;)

Dovax responds:

If you mean the reverb pluck thing at the beggining i actually did it on purpose lol, that's not fron the actual lead itself, its a click with reverb that i layered to the beggining of the intro in the lead, then i removed it as you can hear, thanks for the review!

[Manifest Chaos]

This is amazing, sounds really good to me, the composition and production is perfect; the main problem of this track is the structure, it started too wild (? [I don't know how to explain it pretty well] I mean, the song is lacking calm sections, I would've started the song more calmed and then starting to building up to the actual intro you made, also the transition in the 0:55 was a little bit abrupt, the ending didn't made justice to this piece, but i still enjoyed it! This song have a lot of potential, hope you finish it someday.
I also feel your pain, it's normal to get blocked sometimes, we've passed through that too! When you feel more creative and calm you can keep working on this piece and polish it, anyways, I don't think you want to xD
tbh all the songs we have submitted to a competition got polished after the deadline. Well, nothing much more to say so good luck ;)

[EspiDev - Parfait [Kawaii Future Bass]]

Dem Ujico vibes man!! i'm in love with this genre <3

EspiDev responds:

Snail's House <3

[Detious - Divinity (VIP)]

Loving the ambientation at the beginning, the drop is super creative, great combination between future bass and DnB ;) the basses nailed it!
Keep it up bro <3 looking forward to your future tracks.

[Empyrean]

Noice ;) loved that marimba <3

EtzerGD responds:

thanks man! or should i say men

[His Sacrifice [The Archer Girl Ep.9]]

Incredible! i still can't believe that you made this in GarageBand! loving the history, i appreciate your dedication on writing a story and making music to accompany it ;)

JessieYun responds:

Hi Zelgeon, thanks so much for the comment! So glad you enjoyed the song :D

[Undertale Sans.]

Don't you think Undertale is a little bit old already?

Dodoman0306 responds:

Yes, but I still like Undertale very much.
Besides, this song was made last year.

[Dovax - Safari]

I don't know why do you call this deep bounce, this is just like melbourne bounce mixed with big room, btw this track has a lot potential, the beat is cool, the mixing is neat, the composition is pretty nice and generic tbh, the problem of this track is the lacking of originality and uniqueness it has, if you wanna get known, it's important to find your own sound. Also, the drops are great, but i feel them kinda weak, the horn stab is too short, the lead could have more layers, and you can add more elements on the rhythm to keep it interesting, the build up in the second drop sounded a little bit off beat, the melody in the bridge feels too detuned with all the pitch bends you added to it.

You are absolutely talented but you still have a long way to go, just never stop creating and keep improving more and more, we're looking forward to your future tracks, keep it up!

_Zelgeon.

PS: Te dejamos una review en español en tu remix de summer y no nos respondistes ;((

Dovax responds:

Gracias por tomarse el tiempo de escuchar la cancion y dar una buena critica constructiva, se aprecia, no se porque siguen diciendo que es big room, el big room solo es un kick con una cola grande de bass y un lead con mucho reverb y decay exagerado, esto no tiene nada de eso, en todo caso solo seria bounce a secas, porque tambien el melbourne bounce es diferente, y si estoy intentando hacer mi propio sonido, este lead es similar al de desert bounce, con lo cual use un sidechain diferente y el pitch bend para que le de esa sensacion caracteristica, y el segundo drop quiza se escucha asi porque ahi cambia a triplets, de hecho es lo que hago en la mayoria de mis canciones, el primer drop es normal y el segundo siempre lo hago con triplets, y perdon por no responder en la otra review pero no sabia que decir jaja, un dia deberiamos hacer una colaboracion para ver que pueden implementar a mi estilo, por cierto no sabia que ustedes eran dos con razon sus canciones son tan buenas, ya saben lo que dicen, dos cabezas piensan mejor que una, y todavia mas si son tres :)